Eyes Beholder~

~playing with colors~

blue eyed girls will love you

brown eyed girls, warm your heart

green eyed girls will smile

their velvet smoke screen

on love’s wall

blue eyed girls will catch you

brown eyed girls, break the fall

green eyed girls will weep alone

 

unable to unbind their nature

 

to unbend those stubborn arms

 

 

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Reviews

[The Warrior Poet]

I love this.

I have to leap out into the aisle and yell - "NOT SO!" as I can bear witness to a blue eyed watching a falling heart with a half-smile - never catching nor breaking the fall. That being said - my green eyed wife is always there to pick me and dust me off but only AFTER I crash down into reality's barren tarmac.

I have an image of trying to see through the "velvet smoke screen" to try and make out the "writing on the wall" and not quite making it out until finally, falling, I am caught by blue eyes from "somewhere else"

[just is]

Simply amazing, I adore the opening words. I like your style.

[C]

:-) This one so goes up on my wall.....

[Bard Constantine]

Green eyed girls make me smile, and I wouldn't want them any other way...

[Liz Alexander]

Blue eyes I have seen kind of tell the story of those who looking for it. I like how you compared the eyes colors. I am glad you tell the story.

[Maurice]

My initial reaction to this was: so THAT's the mystery unraveled; it's all in the eyes. So expertly expressed.

[Jennifer Lenhardt]

Absolutely love, love, love this, Selene! And wouldn't you know it - I too am a green eyed girl! I think I heard somewhere that green eyes are the least common. Now I'll have to Google it:) Great piece!

[Brad]

wondered when you'd come up with something to defend your green eyed greatness... :P

[Wolf]

wow very nice loved it

[FireWoman]

Personally, I think green -eyed girls are HOT!
Great play on color & diversity.