Kali Manifest~

~senryu embedded in haiga~

Kali Manifest~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Trance cleaves girl in twain

hindbrain unbolts chthonic flood

disgorging Kali

 

 

 

 

Photocopyright:2010/vssmd/lilytotemarts/amusemusepress

 

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Author's Note

~for senryu slayers~ word of the day~
chthonic~[thon-ik] or chthonian [thoh-nee-uhn]: of or pertaining to deities, spirits, and other beings dwelling under the earth; of or relating to the underworld

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

A cumulative sci-fi feel to this senryu, a la Species, the mythic reference and keyword converging.

Fabulous poster-like haiga version too. You could have a whole haiga poster line selling like hotcakes.

I love the powerful dynamics you muster in a flash. "Chthonic" is a very Scorpio-muscular word, which of course suits your Ascendant to a tee.

[MuSe Ampoule]

I LOVE IT!!!! Kali is one of my all time favorites and this Senryu is perfect!!! Got to give cred where due, that Hindi Goddess is the s**t!

[Brad]

well, that put a nice photo in my head...think i'm off to go eat an entire cow...while it's alive...and pregnant

[Intern'l Shultzfeather]

I'll be walking more softly around. Don't want to disturb anything that might come gnashing up out of the ground at me. Sorry you were cleaved, but its to my benefit. The deities below and those stricken should be left to chill

[My Fair Lady]

Very nice Selenryu.