Diamond Back~

Diamond Back~

A Poem by NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole

My mind, Kahlua

pouring suppositions

over

supper, hungry

for lips

busy exhaling

cosmic formulas

at a bar

 

Praline seduction

lady fingers

diaphanous

against the pressure

of your genius

pressing

cerebral blooms

open

layer by layer

creamy core shaken and stirred

served straight up

on my diamond back

coiled to strike

 

 

 

copyright:2010vssmd/amusemusepress

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© 2010 NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole


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The poem is beautiful. Photo made the words come alive. I saw diamond backs at a distance in the Texas desert. I believe best to leave them alone. They want no part of man. Man need to leave them in peace. I like the description and the ending. Diamond backs snakes are one of natures wonders. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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the beauty of poison..and diamond back serpents beautifully penned...
great imagery..left me speechless

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am envisioning
"lips
busy exhaling
cosmic formulas"
and I imagine that if one wanted to seduce a rattlesnake, those cosmic formulas would be necessary.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sitting waiting for the prey to meet her at that bar. Would there be pleasantries past between the two, would there be a wink? Or would she just strike. Great piece. Great Imagery.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May those coils find a place to relax and stretch without someone or something making you wish you were made of marble.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

allright, who's gonna suck the poison out?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shawn renee said it best, hehe... this is one of your utmost treasures... so wonderful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is going into my favorites. Enough said.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The poem is beautiful. Photo made the words come alive. I saw diamond backs at a distance in the Texas desert. I believe best to leave them alone. They want no part of man. Man need to leave them in peace. I like the description and the ending. Diamond backs snakes are one of natures wonders. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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My dear-my goodness &
"My mind, Kahlua pouring suppositions" & chase it with Bacardi 151-
down my throat-(did i dream this?)
"seduction lady fingers diaphanous against the pressure"
(I repeat-Did i dream this Luv???
" layer by layer creamy core shaken and stirred"
fantisies are so so sweet with your poetry-
"served straight up on my diamond back coiled to strike"

IF ONLY A REALITY...Luv the images ;)




Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The image of the snake poised caps off the images of longing for sensual pleasure... the pressure and pressing was striking... and the creamy core of the nutty chocolate....

I liked the brevity and clarity of this... and the charm of your words with their slippery pleasures

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 21, 2010
Last Updated on November 21, 2010
Tags: poetry, raw in the genes, helix and sphere, spiral push, diamondback, fluid cortex, ain't no lover raw enough, girl with venom mind, fruition in dark fruit, wotd, seduction, selene skye, night strut

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NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole

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