Pathway

Pathway

A Poem by Blackrose
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Just Trying something new stylistically :)

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Replacing

Renewing

            Rebirth

                Reform

Entrancing

Relaxing

            Torn down

                 Mistakes…

                        A beauty within

                   A scared past which blends

                        Which tears down,

           Releases

                        And heals purely,

           Redeems

Replacing

Renewing

            Bring Joy

            Bring faith

Entrancing

Relaxing

            New life

                New day

 

© 2009 Blackrose


Author's Note

Blackrose
Lol, what do YOU think its about XD Criticism is good, Im trying something new after all :P lol, I use the same style too much :P always four line stanza abcb rhyming pattern :P so I hope this worked :P

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Added on March 12, 2009
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Blackrose
Blackrose

Mannheim, Germany



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