My life stood, a symphony.

A re-writing of the Emily Dickinson poem "My Life had stood a loaded gun"

My life stood, a symphony,
Conducted by dramatic process in life.
Minor suppresses times of glee-
Major-times of strife.

Manipulated b the rise-
and fall-
of my crescendo aided heart.
Darkness haunts: Dawn to Dawn,
Anticipated before I start.

As Fault lands on there staved shoulders
-of mine, I crave delight
in the faces carved into the boulders,
as try to make things right. 

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

What an interesting concept, using musical langauge to describe the turbulent ride that is our journey through life. You have molded them together very well reading it, its almost like i can see the very strings of life and hear the notes of each emotion.

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nice...i liked + loved = enjoyed...

[Sami Khalil]

Darkness haunts: Dawn to Dawn,
Anticipated before I start.
My faves in this nice write...:)

[Serena Clara]

Thankyou! Glad you enjoyed it!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)