never could i escape

This is escaping from with in my troubles

The night is gloomy nothing is moving
but the scratching of the trees
the hides in the dark and the leaves
that has already fallen from the harsh gust
the sky shows peeks of orange light thru
the salty clouds as the hours pass
the feeling of calmness slows per second
there is no embrace of my darken soul
which awaits to renew itself beyond meaning
my heart is ice cold hardening from the pain
and black scars this tall lanky fellow has put upon me
I no longer can see him in my thoughts
for which stops me from closing my eyes
to rest or the beating on the door at midnight hour
do I hide myself or do I run
if I ran would he follow my footprints
thru the grass and the cracking of the branches
that awaits my every move
im scared to know what is out there
so I sit here rocking back in forth
in this stained hard chair.

Author's Note

Its about trying to escape ones self from the torture but really there's no escape

Reviews

[Sirius King]

Hey Tammara :-)

I'm really glad u are still writing,
I look forward to reading and reviewing more of your work!
Keep them coming!

[Sami Khalil]

A good read and write...Thank you for penning...:)..............

[passionberry]

Aurora (Sal) thank you for reviewing my poems I appreciate your feed back I have to more to come lets stay in touch on each others writing I really do enjoy ur poems as well.

[Salar Majak]

wow! this is good! this is really realy good, it kind of eminds me of Poe's writings, beautiful, i love the way you put the poem as a story, and it flowes in a great way to, keep it up!

[passionberry]

Aw ..Thank you Ron I'm smiling in happy u reviewed my poem thank u so much

[ron]

This is a very good poem. Prof read it and add some punctuations. Try breaking it up into shorter sentences to make it easier to read. It is a very good poem.

[passionberry]

Thanx Greg! I appreciate your feed back😊

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Ah, you can escape physically, but not emotionally. Very good.