Tic Tic.

boom.

Tic Tok

 

Sometimes I wish
I could just cease to exist.

 
My aching heart resists
the urge to run away,
so I stay.

Yet I pray every day
for a way to let you go.

while your love burns, 
like a fire thru my soul,
taking control of all of me,
consuming me so I cannot see,
while the end escapes me.

 
I am left right where I started,
among the broken hearted.

 

Who only cry out;
"Dearly departed,

we would rather you not stay,
find your own way,
release the chains that bind,
free your mind,
while you still have time."

 

Yet I am blind,
for I cannot leave my demise,
without open eyes.

The pain is too much for me to bare,
so I am left standing there,
chained to my indescision,
while the clock ticks away the seconds
of my choice.

Leaving me without a voice 
to stop it.

 

tic tok. tik tok. tik tok.

 

 

sb.

Author's Note

just a lil bit of creativity, tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Antoinette]

Ahhh, you are such an awesome artist. I never get bored reading your work. Your talent is a true inspiration, I haven't written in quite a while, but just reading your stuff makes me want to pick up a pen. Your choice of words were sheer brilliance and the fact that you could put a rhythm with your poem to make it flow is just mind blowing. Great job and thanks again for the inspiration.

[WordMaster]

I think for the most part it's wonderful

I didn't care for the "Dearly departed�." phase

At the end, I would have stop at "Leaving me without a voice" - is anything after that necessary?

Many know the feeling you expressed so well

[Seriana]

Oooh, I like it! Very much. I loved the rhyming parts. You might take off the last 3 words and end with voice. It's a nice rhyme. :) I LOVED the topic. So sad, and so real. Thank you for writing this!