A Poem About Love

Its A Poem About Love...lol

love is a colorless rainbow in the night's

sky.

like music of the soul..

it takes control

and leaves u wondering why,

why?

why is love so complicated,

sometimes i love, love,

sometimes i hate it.

most people crave love,

some can't face it

i sometimes dream about it so real i can almost taste it

sweet as sweet could ever be

then it turns sour and the dream is incomplete

love is a feeling i can't defeat

it is a dangerous emotion

especially for those who play games

it hits u like a bullet of a shotgun

and doesn't stop to take names

and u lay there smiling

all covered in blood

this is my poem

a poem about love....

Author's Note

i wrote this in middle school,,,so be nice :-)
lol

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

Well, you were a talented middle schooler then my dear. You have done a great job expressing then and it could still be applied to now.... But love....... write again how it makes you feel now... Just to see where you stand after living and experiencing more.:)

[Sirius King]

that is a great idea! ill have to work on that

[Priscilla Sayers]

:) Love to you...
Love comes from everywhere dear friend remember when you're pondering how many different types of ways there is to love and where you receive it:)

[Kelsey]

I can hardly believe you wrote this in middle school. It's truly great. I love the flow, I love the idea. Everything about it is wonderful. Amazing job.

[Sirius King]

yea its true, its one of the first poems i remember writing...thanx for ur comment!

[Kelsey]

Wow, it's amazing that you were writing poetry this good in middle school. You're welcome!

[Sirius King]

:-)