You're my POETRY

I hear loads of word drips,
From those two lovely lips,
You are my only best haiku.

The humorous part of you,
Every time it’s something new,
You become my senryu.

Our love so best and long,
Really true, serious and strong,
None other than you can be my ode.

The every repeated kiss,
Are such a delight and bliss!
You become my refrain poetry..

The surprises and reverse twist that you give,
Those memories in my mind mostly outlive,
What more can I call you than an irony?

Every day is a song,
Our love so rhythmic and long,
You become my lovable ballad.

Every time we talk something crap,
Mostly funny and we laugh without gap,
Oh! Nothing but you, are my doggerel.

You make me live and make my day,
I love all what you mean and  say,
None else other than you can be my carpe diem.

The peaceful moments spent with you,
Are so pure like the droplets of dew,
You are my definition of idyll.

The moments of love and love making,
Is so passionate and breath taking,
Our romantic times form a lovely sonnet.

The freedom and the rules we break,
We make our life delicious like a cheesecake,
Our life is nothing but a free verse.

We both rhyme and think alike,
There is nothing in you that I dislike,
We are a perfect example of a couplet.


1st

Jul 16, 2010

• & I love it the most..
• You're my POETRY

The Rhymers Award

Jul 20, 2010

• Rhyming Poetry
• You're my POETRY

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

I read poetry when I feel drawn to a soul ...I already said that I like your style many times before,( but this poem my sweets !!! )
Has got me so embedded word by word. The way you laid these verses.
I think I will read it again and again..you really want to know if I like it? Poet, I wonder why ,if you are right and there's a twin soul that belong to us or the opposite, do we belong in someone's else's life? It scares me when I read the last verse, even in the mind Ha!
Please promise that no matter what , you'll never let go.. ok?
That's how much I like this poem..xx00

[A.Lee]

This is very sweet and clever. I love the last stanza.
"We both rhyme and think alike,
There is nothing in you that I dislike,
We are a perfect example of a couplet."

Nice work.

[deeps]

This is wonderful, i enjoyed this. It's witty and clever.

[Simple_mee]

This was so witty. Just loved it ... a perfect ode to the love for literature!

[Phibby Venable]

very witty and fun to read!

[R E Tree]

Every word to this makes this poem sensational. I love how you ahve described every type of poem. It sounds beautiful and it has a gentle sweet tone. I think this poem is well planned and a brilliant idea to make a poem like this.

[Sara]

aw, literature and love... two of my favorite things in one... :)

[Wicahpi]

Yeah! What Em said, because she says it best!!
Excellent poem :)

[emmajoy]

This is wonderfully clever.. love the way you've put this together and it works so well .. the haiku interpretation is the least correct but it honestly doesn't matter because the rest are brilliant.

There's not only literary worth here but a wonderful exposure of your feelings and they're so happily in love. Makes me smile.