Another one

Another one

A Poem by ShaneBerry

workout poem


I pump,

And lift the iron up

Pain in my arms like no other.

My muscles tear

My body wears

Sweat pours

I let out a roar

I shout as I lift

Pumping my fist

Another one!

My heartbeat runs

I burn like the sun!

Another one!

© 2010 ShaneBerry

Author's Note

i say this while i am working out to force me to continue

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Great, great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I find pumping iron almost as therapeutic as writing or playing music. each one satisfies in a different way but yet in the same way. keep pumping

Posted 13 Years Ago

I know the feeling. I split and haul wood daily. The most intense work for me is moving massive rocks(out of my garden) and chill out in my sweatlodge that is as hot as the sun(I was told) then I am ready for the next day.
Creature of habit when I am home, unless I sense different, then it's whisper mode.
Life and Light!

Posted 13 Years Ago

I will remember this next time I'm pumping iron. You capture the feeling very well. Keep getting swoll! (apologies for the enthusiasm of my athletic alter ego)

Posted 13 Years Ago

To find poetry in every activity we do..and in every thing we see..what else could you ask for.

Posted 13 Years Ago

You are very straight forward…
When you express yourself…
I like the uprightness in your lines…
Loved this short poem….very much..

Posted 13 Years Ago

The desire of muscle take great pain and hard work. I was in the Army for 15 years. I can break down a complete body down in 40 minutes. The grass drill is about 500 push-ups and 500 sit-up non-stop in 20 minutes. Ending with a trip to the pull-up bars. A very good poem. I could feel the pain in your words. A excellent poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Delightful, simple and flows well.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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modern day torture chambers...LOL well done

Posted 13 Years Ago

I can relate, bein' an ol' barbell wrangler. Just beware of too much tear!

I could see this as a workout poster. . .;-)

Posted 13 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on August 14, 2010
Last Updated on August 14, 2010



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My Chemical Romance “The Ghost of You” Name: Shane Douglas Berry Age: Born on 8/4/1992 Hair color: Brown Eye color: Green Skin color: White, Freckled Tattoos: Oroborus (red, center.. more..

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