Love Hate

I started this when I was talking to a special guy, whom turned out to be a big mistake.

I could show you perfection,

you can be my hearts selection..

The perfect choice?

All the way to your sweet, sweet voice..

So what is it that makes me like you?

Is it really that hard to see?

Well, I hope that you like me,

so please, please stay with me..

Or your just another lie, just another cry,
just another fake, just another big mistake,
another picture to be burned, another acid filled stomach to be churned,
 another lonely night with my thought and me,
just another night, another night with me.

Author's Note

The colors show the change of feeling, I thought it'd be easier to understand.
But, again. I wrote the pink when that certain someone was special; the grey is the change of heart.

Reviews

[Wynd Wolf]

yes.. I see what you are saying there.. Its as if you have a sudden doubt in this love and feel unsure..

[ayele marie dalmeida]

it is very disappointing to find out that a person you care about or beginning to care about isn't who you though they were , that's why i love this piece so much . well done :)

[Crystal Autumn]

Thank you very much. I write as I go.
I feel that it means more when you're in the moment.

[Cassie]

Good start! :) the colors was cute.