Your Evanescence

Your Evanescence

A Poem by Sharkapillar
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It's two poems on one page...read between the lines, you'll see. (Evanescence is my nickname)

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You are so fake, this you cannot deny

I read between everyone's lines, you see

You smile in class whilst inside you cry

No secret can be kept from me

You keep some sadness I can't decode

I know you hide an inner pain

Burdened by some imperceptible load

Hence the unspoken words of your disdain

I've seen the difference on and off site

Happiness now, not time, is of the essence

When you choose to land your false flight

Smile--You are my Sun, and I your Evanescence ♥

© 2010 Sharkapillar


Author's Note

Sharkapillar
Both written with Sun in mind (she calls me Evanescence)

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Beautifully written!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really like this....
i like that i can read
it 3 differant ways.
thats awesome. (:
great write. (:
&& i like the nickname. great band. (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I adore this poem. Well done, great job! I enojyed the colour scheme too.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Being able to see what a person is hiding shows you know them pretty well, even if that someone is you. I say that because we can try to hide from ourselves as well but still know the truth of whats going on with us. Nice job. I like this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sharkapillar
Sharkapillar

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