Nights Like This

It's nights like this that i just lay there.

My limp, almost lifeless body.

I lay staring up at the ceiling as my eyes begin to fill up. 

Every possible emotion,

Every possible scenario,

Every possible situation runs through my head.

How is it that all of these feelings come from just one person?

One boy.

One friend.

One love.

Reviews

[J. F. Charleston]

Well for starting I'll say, it's pretty good and totally relatable, well to me anyway, except instead of a boy it's a girl. It's gets hard after awhile wanting to be with someone, but it just doesn't seem to happen. Then you start the dreaming and the wishing...

Anyway about the suggestions. You might want to add some more to it. And another thing, write what you feel, well what your heart is saying. If that makes since.

[J. F. Charleston]

Sorry again, but I don't really know what to suggest. Write from your heart. It's really good now. And I can relate in a similar way, but over a girl.