The Journey

The Journey

A Poem by Joyrider
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this little poem is about the journey of life of different type of people. interpret it and let me know what you think

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In the journey from fire to fire

Pushing as much to the mire

Luring up with wicked desire

Sinking in dark, then leaving in the dire


In the journey from dust to dust

Porcelain is moving to the rust

Tasting every forbidden lust

Resting with the snake inside the crust


In the journey from light to light

Ceaseless in tugging to the right

Cleansing up the worsening sight

Arduous in the filth, still shining bright

© 2015 Joyrider


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This is a very good effort. I am not sure I understand it completely, but the words are very readable

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on March 25, 2015
Last Updated on March 25, 2015
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Joyrider
Joyrider

cochin, kerala, India



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