Never Coming Home

Never Coming Home

A Poem by Muffin<3
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It's slightly dark.

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In a crevice imbedded in to the Earth
The place I used to know
Where the darkness stole my soul
To be forcefully deleted from my mind
Hoping that one would come
I stood looking and searching
But to my plea, no one is here to save me
Burnt edges of my mind
From lost hope and denial
It struck me harder then any blow
To know that I'll never come home.

© 2010 Muffin<3


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Muffin<3
This is a poem I had written awhile ago. Please review. I can handle criticism. I love to hear what people think.

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Oh, wow, this is amazing. Simply amazing, and I love it. Nothing much more to say than that, other than the imagery is wonderful. :)

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Hi Im Sarah, aka Muffin. A lil abot me: I'M VERY RANDOM!!! AND A HUGGER! I have a weird, yet lovable personality. I rather not conform and be molded into something I'm not. I have extreme PIE A.. more..

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