Good Days

A Poem by Hayley

I don't even know what this is. I just wrote it.

Her life was a mystery

Her eyes were full of sorrow

She was old

She was weak

She laughed

She cried

Everything was hard

She didn’t have a clue

She tried for her family

She tried for her friends

Nothing seemed right anymore

Something was missing

She searched

And failed

Her life was a mystery

© 2009 Hayley

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Pepsimax

i think mabye an old women who has been given up on by family amd friends and her death is expected at any moment. in a sense it brings sadness but still your a great writer and only 11 to write something like that is amazing.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on December 27, 2009
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Hayley

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

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I am currently 11 years old, almost 12. I love writing, reading and anything to do with literature. My idols are Hilary Duff and Selena Gomez (Disney Star). I am very mature for my age and get a lo.. more..