Pass The Magic

Green and sticky 

Smells so good 

I break it down 

And release the love 

Take the paper 

To roll it up 

Spark with fire 

Peace pours out 

Inhale love 

Exhale hate 

Feel all the better 

As the world stands still 

Time keeps moving 

People keep living 

As I sit 

Watching and imagining 

If peace could live 

Without any interuptions 

This world would be better 

The man 

Thinks they own us 

But with one magic hit 

It all is gone 

To share some peace 

Come sit by me 

As I pass 

The magic around

Reviews

[Violet's Run]

This is a fun light hearted poem and i love the happy dance it does all the way through like you smoked a dube and you are feeling happy.. looking for the pizza delivery boy and your old recordings of Cheech and Chong.... LOVE THIS guilty pleasure poetry.

[Bluefire]

Sounds nice and peaceful, evading the man for the magic only to imagine and dream of a better world.
I like this piece.
Well done! ^^

[John Ryan]

its short and sweet :)

i like it very much
reminds me of several fuzzy memories :D

[Coyote Poetry]

I like how you described the pleasure of the herb. Make it have life and some magic. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Zahra]

Very nice, enjoyed reading this

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Trying to figure out what this is about but it is Interesting. Blessings

[Stephanie Irene]

It's about how marijuana came cause peace. If everyone in the world lit up at the same time. There bout be about 2 hours of world peace .

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

that maybe why I wasn't so sure about it. I thought that's what it was I will just stick to reading just the poem nothing else lol. thank you for answering

[Stephanie Irene]

You're welcome. Im glad you tried to see other points to it though. I tried to make people think but for it also be kinda right in front of you aswell.

[A. Amos]

This is interesting and mesmerizing piece, simply beautiful

[Stephanie Irene]

Thank you '')