Dream

Dream

A Poem by Shuchita

You were the dream,
that my eyes couldn't believe was real

© 2017 Shuchita


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Sometimes, a few words mean more than many sentences.

Sometimes, a statement is worth more than a whole speech.

Sometimes, something so short and powerful is all that is needed.

Thank you for sharing your words.

Posted 2 Years Ago


wonderful sentiment, I love how much you said with such few words

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shuchita

2 Years Ago

thank you!!
Sweetly succinct. Having a lover who's like a beautiful dream is what helps to keep me going some days.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shuchita

2 Years Ago

yes :) thank you for reading it
Lovely. Short. But sweet and romantic

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shuchita

2 Years Ago

thank you! :)
Smtyms what our eyes see....
All r not true..... World is virtual.... Try to accept everything

Posted 2 Years Ago


A bit short. A wonderful statement of love though.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

2 Years Ago

thank you! :D
Not your best for me but not bad at all, just some of yours have that wit, cleverness, and that spontaneity.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

I'm sorry to disappoint you and will work to not let that happen :)
You said everything needed in the poem. Sometime we can receive a miracle in the emotion of love. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

thank you so much :D
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
I just felt like I needed more lines from this. Anyway, this will surely melt somebody's heart so nice lines. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

thank you! :) and I will definitely take your review into consideration
Wow. So heart touching. I really liked it. You said a lot in a line.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

It was my pleasure.

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