Alone

No one knows my pain

No one knows my sorrow

Alone,

Alone.

 

Trapped in a place that

No one understands me.

Lost in a place where

Everyone rejects me.

 

Sinning is my past,

Redemption my presents,

Rejoicing my future.

 

I longing for the future

Unwilling to release the past,

God I wonder were are you

In all of this.

 

By my side

You whisper,

By my side forever

Never alone

Alone.

 

No one but You know my pain

No one but You know my sorrow

As dark as my world may seem,

Alone I will never be,

For You oh God are with me.

 

Reviews

[Ethan Paz]

Good way of showing that you are not accepted but you are willing to change for the better. God accepts you as you are just come to Him. Good write and good job conveying that to your audience.

[Poeticpiers]

WE all have a built in sense of right and wrong Niya but whether we choose to listen to that still small voice is our choice.

I enjoyed your spill of words in free form even though I am an old fashioned rhyme and meter poet