Wings of Light and Breath of Fire

This creature is another one of the random products of my imagination. : ) It's basically a dragon-phoenix that flies through different worlds fighting off evil and death.

The Wings of Light descend upon

he mountain's rocky slope.

A testament of times long gone,

a guardian of hope.

 

She sings her shining, beacon tone

throughout the darkened land,

but none within the walls of stone

hear her, the dragon grand.

 

With Wings of Air and Breath of Fire

she fights the clawing dark.

She burns away, a living pyre,

a glowing, mighty spark.

 

Reborn from cleansing flames of light,

her blaze consumes the spell

that keeps the captive land in blight

through Spring's redeeming well.

 

The spell undone, she floats away

through windows in the sky

to other worlds of dark decay

and they who do not fly.

 

For she is mighty Wings and Breath

of Light and oldest Fires.

Rejecting darkness, sickness, death,

the plagues of Dark Empires.

Author's Note

As always, feel free to critique.

Reviews

[Phoenix Alleena]

This is simply amazing! I really enjoyed reading this poem's story.

The whole thing with describing the Dragon was amazing!
You did an excellent job. Keep up the great work!

[Panda]

This is a wonderful piece of work, it is like a story poem. I loved how you described this creature.

Very imaginative and well written!

Well done!

[Wildfleour]

I like this very much, Justin. My only suggestion would be to look how you use capital letters at the beginning of lines.

[Kayla]

Justin this desearved to win first place. that was absouluty magical. You are an absoulutly fantastic writer. BRAVO!!!

[gemma]

i like it its truly beautiful and i think you should use this to your fullesty abilities because it shows a beauty that most writers dont write that often KEEP ON GOIN!!! :)

[Pakino]

I love the rhyming in the story. Simple to understand and picture. Loved it!