Dogs

This is for our two dogs, Buddy, who we've had for three years, and Tobi, who we just got.

Dark, stormy gray streaks of fur

are crowned by a black strip across the back.

golden-brown eyes take in light and bend it,

sending it forth with every shake of his head.

 

His faded red collar jingles with every step,

the engraved word, "Buddy," flickering in the sun.

His floppy ears, half up, half down,

perk up with every distant noise in excitement.

 

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Jet black, soft fur runs along her body

in a fluffy, luxurious coat of joy.

Her smooth head bobs up and down

as her curious gaze scans the room.

 

Tiny, dark paws trip over themselves

in her rush to explore her new surroundings.

Week-old eyes of deep, deep brown

glow with purity, innocence, and joy.

 

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Love and fascination bind these two

in complex patterns of the world.

Though they are unique in body, mind, and spirit,

their purity, curiosity, and intense compassion

make them more alike than any two human beings ever could be.

Author's Note

As always, feel free to critique.

Reviews

[happy girl]

Awwwww that was really good, great in fact. Very good job :D

[Kiya]

A wonderful way to describe these furry creatures. Deifinitely alike, no matter how different they seem. Well done :)

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

I believe in the last line you mean to use the word 'ever' rather than 'every'. No matter - a delightful ode to your pets. Thank you. Enjoy them, they are miraculous aren't they?
Light,
Siddartha

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Wonderful poem, nicely written. They sound so cute, I have a lab/bordercollie mix he is black and white spots named scooby doo. Dogs are our best friends and companions. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Dani California]

I like this Justin!
I agree w/Michelle..what a lovely read about your best friends :)
Dogs are such loyal loving pets... :) We could learn from them..lol.

Great job!!!

[Wildfleour]

Nice, Justin!

A lighthearted read about "man's best friend(s)".