Dream Slot Machine

Dream Slot Machine

A Poem by argentum lumen

Having a dream,

It's a mental slot machine.

 

The slots are memories,

And sights and sounds.

 

They keeping turning 'round,

Till a dream is found

And if it's a bust?

You're asleep and can't make a fuss.

 

You dream on 'cause you have to.

You have no say.

Like a gamble it's hard to walk away.

 

Sometimes you go bankrupt and get no dreams at all,

Or hit jackpot and wake up while you're still enthralled.

© 2012 argentum lumen


Author's Note

argentum lumen
I think i'm developing serious gambler mentality.

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Lol on you note. I like presented idea about dreams.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the flow of thios poem and the analogy. It's true when u goit out on a limb to perduer ur dreams, u don't know whether you'd get what u want or not.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This rocked! Dreaming is like a gamble because you cannot choose the outcome. I loved the analogies, great read!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 7, 2011
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