Mutual menace

Short introduction to a though that passed me today. If I get positive reviews, I'll write another part

You know how people always tend to start their stories or books by describing the weather? Well, I won't. In this story you are on a need to know base. You do not need to know the weather. One thing you do need to know is that I am a liar. And a great person. However, the other day, something bad happened to me. I kind of got hit by a car. Or at least I think I did. I'm in this hospital like area and there are nurses all around me. The last thing I remember is the fact that I was riding on my bike. From where you might ask? From the local library of course, it's my favorite place to be. Did that sound convincing? Good. I in fact came from my girlfriends house, we had an argument about where to go on a holiday. Or rather, wether we should go on a holiday or not. Anyways, I'm drifting of. I'm writing this on my iPhone in order to memorize as many details about this place as possible, since I don't know what happened to me and I Might be losing my mind. And I'm a liar, so I can't really trust my brain anyways. I tried getting up out of my bed, but felt a horrible pain in my chest. I screamed. A man, seemingly a doctor, walked in to check on me. I asked him what had happened to me, but he wouldn't answer. Or rather, he lied to me. He told me I got kidnapped and rescued after tree weeks of imprisonment by a mad men. Of course I didn't believe him, I mean, how could I? How could anyone? After staying in the hospital for 2 weeks, I returned to my house, only to find no one home. Curious as to what had happened to me, I looked on the Internet, trying to find if anybody had been searching for me in the past three weeks. They had searched for me, but nobody had reported that I was back alright again. And that's when I heard a strange noise and saw a red glowing strip of metal light up in my chest. What was happening to me!?

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think of this, should I write more or refine and how can I improve?