Tired of Wondering

Tired of Wondering

A Poem by Nae Nae

When you hold me inside of your arms,
Do you feel like that's where I belong?

When you look at me into my eyes,
Can you see all the pain that's inside?

Or do you just see, what you want me to be,
Like I'm not even me at all?

I get tired of wondering every day,
If you're with me for me, or if you want me to change.

Cause I'm not going to do it, I won't change for you,
I'm tired of the pain that I feel every day, from doing the things that I do.

And the pain that I go through, every day just for you,
I can't bear any longer, I'm out of here now, not for you!

So don't come and find me, cause you'll never find me,
You won't ever see me again. 
Now good-bye.

© 2010 Nae Nae


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This is a interesting, I like the concept, but there are a few problems with flow. Try reading your work aloud a few times, when you find words that break the pattern of speech see if you can take them out. It'll make your workd really shine. :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well created expression of how you feel. No one likes someone trying to change them.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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