The Wishing Well.

Standing by the side of a wishing well,

Wishing for a life not hell,

Swishing round the game of life,

No knife, no blade,

Laying on the green grass,

Wishing for nice,

Hoping for good,

Hoping to be as strong as wood,

Walking on a rainy night,

Realizing the loneliness and isolation I suffer,

Unknown and unwanted she was,

Knows that she is hated,

For her face, race and colour forever,

Have no friends till the end of never,

Hoping for a life not hell,

She laid under the green grass forever.

Reviews

[New Theory]

Beautifully written poem, the story of a lonely girl and her feelings are described perfectly in this poem. The thing I love about this poem is the repetitive use of "Hope" and "Wish". It shows that the girl still has hope in her of a better future in all this problem still there is hope and that is strong message.
God bless

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. (:

[New Theory]

you are welcome and please check some of my work too. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is so sad… i know some people just feel they do not fit in and are all alone in this world… I have had moments of that myself…. very nicely written.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you.
That really is true. It happens with me as well.
There are moments in everybody's life when they feel that they don't belong to this world itself, leave fitting in a group of people.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I love this poem, and the way you portrayed it. Stunning, beautiful, amazing, outstanding.

Kaze~

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Kaze. (:

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Saddam]

Unknown and unwanted she was,
Knows that she is hated,
For her face, race and colour forever,
Have no friends till the end of never,

Loved it. My god, wish I can found that well. Truelly enjoy it.

[Simran Kewlani]

Haha! Thank you SSADD. (:

[Saddam]

you are welcome dear, not joking you are best poet.

[Saddam]

you are welcome dear, not joking you are the best poet.

[Stephanie Irene]

Unknown and unwanted she was,
Knows that she is hated,
For her face, race and colour forever,
Have no friends till the end of never

Best part ")

[KittyVenus]

brilliant poem!!! LOVE IT!!! XD XD XD

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Kitty. (:

[KittyVenus]

You're verry welcome

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Very Deep , Deep my friend many of us know how this feel's. Blessings


Walking on a rainy night,

Realizing the loneliness and isolation I suffer,




Unknown and unwanted she was,

Knows that she is hated,

For her face, race and colour forever,

Have no friends till the end of never,

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you! (:

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're are very welcome blessings

[Vidya Bacchus]

If it were so easy to escape the pain of our lives.Very well penned S :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Vidya. (:

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[xDalliance]

It's so amazing! Pain, sadness, aspirations, wishes, life everything crammed together in such a simple yet strong poem with a deep meaning. Another one I love Simran! Your poems always go straight to the heart! Keep it up! :)

[Simran Kewlani]

It isn't my best, but thank you! (:

[xDalliance]

Your very welcome!