The Beauty Of Nature.

Her beautiful eyes looking at the snowing forest,

 

Her beautiful gown flowing like the waves of the never ending ocean,

 

Scenes of the peaceful trees dancing gently to the music of the birds,

 

The dead silence that falls with frequent sounds of animals and birds,

 

Her honest words personify the laws of nature.

Author's Note

Sorry guys, I couldn't upload my poems. There were some technical problems.

Reviews

[KWP]

I get a sense of peace and tranquility from these words and I like it very much ... very calming ...

my suggestion would be to use verbs or more descriptive words for the first word of each line to immediately grab the readers attention :)

i like your style here - well done xx

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, I will make sure to make use of your suggestion. (:

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Such a beautiful poem, loved this poem. ^_^

Kaze~

[Simran Kewlani]

Aww thank you Kaze! (:

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. ^_^

[KittyVenus]

Really short but really enchanting!

XD

[Simran Kewlani]

Short is sweet, Kitty. xD
I didn't wanna add anything to it. These lines just flowed naturally. (:

[KittyVenus]

You must have THE GIFT!!! XD

[Simran Kewlani]

Haha! xD..

[Saddam]

Scenes of the peaceful trees dancing gently
to the music of the

It is very unique one dear, to close to the nature. Great write.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you SSADD. (:

[Saddam]

you are welcome dear.

[Frieda P]

Very luverly imagery here Simran, like the calming effect that this poem makes me feel. :-)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. (:

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I love it Lovely. Blessings

Lovely lines.

Her beautiful gown flowing like the waves of the never ending ocean,



Scenes of the peaceful trees dancing gently to the music of the birds,

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. (: