Those Eyes.

Those Eyes.

A Poem by Simran Kewlani
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Eyes speak what the lips are unable to.

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Eyes that never lie,

Pile the tears for the later cry,

Fight with the world faking a smile,

Hide behind the world crying all night,

Lost and unknown those eyes were,

Searching for something known,

Bright as the light,

Strong and mighty as the knight.

 

Eyes that never cry,

Eyes that always try,

Make contact with fire,

While the tears have been flowing forever.

 

The eyes that never cry,

The eyes that never lie,

Are they the eyes that are satisfied?

Or the eyes that always try?

© 2015 Simran Kewlani


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Yes it is true that looking in another''s eye you can tell a lot about what they are feeling, but some do put on a poker face and can fool you as well. Excellent work my friend, really love this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simran Kewlani

10 Years Ago

A poker face cannot always hide the sadness in one's eyes. It's just a mask. But, some people have t.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome… I hate to think your smile is fake though, you deserve to be happy.
Simran Kewlani

10 Years Ago

I hope. But, the people that deserve good never get it. They just seem to suffer through hell. (:
so much about eyes...
XD XD XD
love this poem if the rating was on a scale of 1-10 i would rate this 567... yet i cant- its only to 100 so it will have to be 100... sorry Simeran...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simran Kewlani

10 Years Ago

Awww thank you Kitty. :*
KittyVenus

10 Years Ago

you are extreemely and completely utterly welcomly-welcome! (using extensive vocabulary that probabl.. read more
Eyes are definitely telling. Would have preferred 'night' to 'knight' in that last line, first stanza but see you used it earlier, doesn't flow as well, nonetheless, enjoyed Simran.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simran Kewlani

10 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda. (:
Such a stunning poem.

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simran Kewlani

10 Years Ago

Thank you! (:
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

10 Years Ago

Your very welcome, it was my pleasure reading it. ^_^
Great poem keep them coming

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simran Kewlani

10 Years Ago

I will. Thank you! (:
melissa

10 Years Ago

Your welcome
The eyes that never cry,
The eyes that never lie,
Are they the eyes that are satisfied?
Or the eyes that always try?

Well said dear. Lovely

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simran Kewlani

10 Years Ago

Thank you! (:
Eyes are the window to the soul they say.Very nice poetry Simran :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simran Kewlani

10 Years Ago

Yes.
Thank you! (:
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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Simran Kewlani
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