Hope Is Not A Lie.

Hopes are not lies but dreams that don't come true.

Darkness is an obsession,

Possession of loneliness,

In the heavenly tides of nowhere,

We hope for salvation.

 

In the darkness of the night,

We hope for the stars to shine bright.

 

We hope for intelligence,

To know the speed of time.

 

We hope for a clear mind and a pure heart,

To love the broken pieces of the owners of the hunched shadows.

 

We hope for all but not hate,

But let’s just say,

Hate comes in plenty when unwanted.

Author's Note

Reviews please, you amazing writers. :)

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Your description was amazing, and theres many truths to this piece. :-))

Kaze~

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Katherine. :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-))

[Luna Zerimar]

Your description would've been enough for this poem. That's how good it is.

This poem makes the description shine. That's even better.

"Hate comes in plenty when unwanted." So true.

Adoring poem. Keep writing sister. You're amazing.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, girly. You're sweet.

[amrit]

it ended so soon . these amazing words should keep going , the flow is intense . its more than the title , its an `encore`

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. Really appreciate you reading them. :)

[raj24]

what you said is true..actually we should expect hatred..may be then we can find lots of love..i liked your way of writing..written straightly from heart...with lots of emotions...hope is an illusion..we hold it till we dont find sumthing real..thanks again Simran..:)

Raj

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Raj. Really appreciate your comment. :)

[KWP]

Nice words - without darkness there would be no light, it is within the darkness we learn so we can look back over our shoulders and see how far we have come x x

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you KWP. :)

[A. Amos]

Well written my friend, great message you shared...job well done!

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. Long time. (:

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome...

[Frieda P]

We hope, we dream, but reality still hits us in the face at the least expected times.

We hope for a clear mind and a pure heart,
To love the broken pieces of the owners of the hunched shadows.

Great stanza, selfless and profound, nice work Simran!

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Frieda
I uploaded on the occasion of you being back. :)

[Frieda P]

I'm honored, and really enjoyed this one! :-) x

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are so wise Simmy.Nobody wishes for hate but still it comes.You wrote this so well sweetie .I loved it :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Vee. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)