Love Or Hate?

Both are strong feelings. You get to decide which overpowers your life.

Did you not promise to stay forever?

Even if the problems were bigger than the other,

She slit her wrist and faked a smile,

Miles apart she was from her mind,

She was too confused and sick of life,

She stepped into her grave,

With hatred running through her veins,

Her hands were out of control,

Her eyes saw red,

Before she knew what she did,

She already killed the love of her life.

Author's Note

I believe every poem should have something that helps people get through their life problems. I hope mine helps y'all to solve the dilemma of love or hate. Thank you for reading, you lovely people.

Reviews

[PloughBoy]

It's true what they say. There's a very fine line between love, and hate. Sometimes, when loves turns sour and morphs into hatred, it forces us to hate ourselves, to a degree, wondering if we were the root of the failure. However, harboring hatred does no one any good, and can clearly lead to self-destruction, as it did here in your raw and powerful poem, Simran Kewlani...

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, PloughBoy. :)

[PloughBoy]

It was my pleasure. :]

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Oh wow, this poem was brilliantly well written.

Kaze~ :-))

[Simran Kewlani]

Hehe thank you, Katherine. :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Anytime, my dear. :-))

[Luna Zerimar]

I can't even...

Just...

....

[Simran Kewlani]

Say something, Jessica. Please?

[Luna Zerimar]

I'm sorry. I have no words for this. You left me speechless.

[Simran Kewlani]

Hahaha! Thank you. That's extremely sweet of you. :)

[Luna Zerimar]

You're welcome. (:

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Powerful write I thought she killed herself on the inside
I could be perceiving that wrong but Wow was a twist at the end.


Thank you for sharing.


Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Simran Kewlani]

I've missed you around here. I thought you vanished into the thin air. XD
Glad to have you back. :)
Thank you for reading. I love shocking you guys here.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

no I am still here been bad going on at home like a battle field I wrote about it in a poem but it's calmed down many are praying for me and us both my husband is unsaved and needs God and god hears the prayers I've been posting new poems. No problem thank you for sharing :) Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I thought you were asleep. LOL...

[tia landers]

hey girl your an amazing writer...... love you :*

[Simran Kewlani]

I feel I know you but I am not gonna reveal your identity here, sweetie. I love you too, girly. Thank you for the compliment.

[raj24]

for a moment i was wondering what to say..should i say wow or just say i found it interesting...just like your title..its both...suicide or killing someone is not the answer...ending a relationship is fine..it hurts a lot..but we have to find a way to make this life worth living.. i liked the emotions attached to your words..it moved me...thanks Simran for such a beautiful write up:)

Raj

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Raj. :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Nice poem good message....

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Skyfall. :)

[Pax]

a very tragic end...

there are some instances that we go with our impulses in the hights of our anger that we are blinded of what's wrong and right, then after we the wrong it too late to take it back.

The rhyming is pretty good, i like it. Great work!

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Pax. (:

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Pax. (:

[Pax]

you are welcome!

[MagicAl]

Oh, love the deep meaning behind this... I think you portrayed the confusion and lack of connection between the mind and actions so wonderfully.. Great write, :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. I appreciate your review. :)

[KWP]

Interesting words... not really being into hurting or harm in any way I am finding it hard to say that I 'like' this ... Personally I choose to only leave a positive imprint in this funny little ethnosphere that we have created... maybe perhaps even use the word SHE less and more adjectives ???

[Simran Kewlani]

This is a very old poem. I uploaded it because it has a deep meaning. I didn't wanna make any changes and let it be original. I know there were supposed to be more of adjectives.

[KWP]

:) I understand x x