Hidden Beneath The Flaws.

Your eyes were blindfolded,
Your hands were tied,
You were crying out for dear life.

Your cheeks were tear- stained,
Your lips were blood- stained,
Yet again you were crying out for dear life.

Your screams had gone unheard,
Your soul had been unknown,
But yet you were crying out for dear life.

Your beauty was unseen,
Your flaws were discovered,
But, yet you were crying out for dear life.

One fine day, the tears dried,
There was visibility of tiredness in her eyes,
But this time she didn't cry out for life.

The smile then tried,
Widened with pride,
She then never cried for life.

Author's Note

Sorry for the long wait. Reviews await.

Reviews

[anne]

OMG..feels sad...
The smile then tried,
Widened with pride,
She then never cried for life....took my words away...:))

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Anne. :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing write, and very well penned. :-))

Kaze~

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Kaze. :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[amrit]

great truncated the whole process in few lines , enjoyable read .. i felt only `yet` could`ve been used rather than `but yet` (just my opinion) ..:)

[Simran Kewlani]

Okay, thank you. I'll figure it out.
Keep reviewing. :)

[Mayank]

It goes through tough phase. I liked the way it convey the message that at one time we become numb towards pain!

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. Mayank. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This speaks so inspirationally vibrant to never give up, never surrender cause eventually things will gert better…. Love it.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank youuu. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome hon.

[James Patrick Mc Intyre]

Very Deep, I like the flow.