Meaning Of Life.

Her soul was not living,

It was simply surviving.

 

Her mind was not racing,

It was simply searching for peace.

 

Her heart was not beating,

It was simply helping her to breathe.

 

Her life was considered meaningless,

Until she realized, she herself can give it meaning.

Author's Note

I have written it like 10 minutes ago. Criticism gladly accepted.

Reviews

[Amaris Grove]

Wow, this is awesome. It is so simple, yet extremely powerful.

"Her soul was not living,
It was simply surviving."

I think a lot of people can relate to this, myself included. I love the fact that, as sad as this poem is, it has a message of hope in the last line. Very, very well done.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thanks a ton. This review is extremely sweet.
This is something very common and just wanted to point it out. :)

[R Smith]

for sure you got everything just right, you are the life and the inspiration, bravo :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Richard. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good use of words and I liked the wisdom.
"Her life was considered meaningless,
Until she realized, she herself can give it meaning."
The words are true. We must be happy with our goals and dreams to see hope and joy in the new day. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Coyote. I hope you aren't sugar coating it to hide the fact that it's not good enough.

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm not sugar coating. You stated your point. Create thoughts and you gave the proper answer. Many kinds of poetry. Great poets teach and show. You did.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Coyote. That means a lot. :)

[Saddam]

Her life was considered meaningless,
Until she realized, she herself can give it meaning.

It is wonderful write dear. Sometimes sudden thoughts gives us valuable view, it is so. Like it.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Saddam. :)