COSMOS

I am a black hole

Unequivocal density and intensity

When you’re with me

Time slows down, time stops

I stretch you out and thin

And you never return the same

I never return at all  

I fill your void

My depth intrigues you

And infinite gravity grounds you

My physics are not understood

Yet I am studied daily 

As you peer into the darkness

And travel at the speed of light

You are also a black hole 

And when we collided we created a universe

With unmatched gravitational pull

All powerful and strong

But kill anything that comes too close

Never to be seen again

Lost in eternal space and time

Reviews

[m3lody mae]

This is so good, so emotional. I really like this, it had depth.
Awesome write here

[barleygirl]

I love all your universe imagery to suggest that these two people are two spaceships passing in the night. It's a nice play on the old saying about "two ships passing in the night" (as in ocean ships). I love your uninhibited way of describing things, very fresh & original & unexpected. Your message reminds me of the kind of person who feeds off me, but never gives much back (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[skin crawler]

I'm glad I could portray my feelings and someone could understand! I like the imagery you found in the "ships in the night"; I never noticed it before, I love when others can see art within art :)

[Relic]

You've even thrown some science into the mix. Love can feel as strong a force as any in the universe. The attraction can be overwhelming.

Great poem.

[skin crawler]

thank you! I watched a documentary on black holes last night, and got inspired ;)

[Relic]

Nova, I probably saw the same thing. Great show. It's good to find inspiration through observation. :)