Never Free

i had my heart broken

on a summer day

no she wouldn't have it,

in any other way

my girl, she was my girl and now she ain't

left me on the steps at the home of saints

all these tears man my eyes can paint

let the bright colors drain, 

bring out the f*****g pain.

for whats it worth

you cant stop feeling hurt, 

once she walks whats your worth? 

hell what is she worth?

nothing, now i can see nothing

but when we first met, i was in a daze

i thought she was special

that i had to find a way

but the path to her heart was a long maze

yet i crawled through the long days

hoping she could me see me as i saw her

and that we could embrace

she was so beautiful we couldn't just be friends

i was obsessed, it was a dead end

i was a slave to my feelings

she was the reason, not the real thing

but i was so blind, controlled by lust

she had me change myself, and declare my trust

all the dreams that i had,  now turned to dust.

left alone, i had to pause

winning in love was a lost cause

id rather bet my happiness on fast cars

one girl, accountable to one millions scars

one world, and she blew it up till mars

when the day is over you're wondering now

alone in your room, and you are wondering how

to get over the feeling of seeing

my girl by my side, lost in believing

that my days wont end as long she breathing

before I met her, I was doing my thing

all my dreams had me work for bling

all day all night, hope had me sing

wouldn't care if my mom made my phone ring

i was going for the win, gonna ignore everything.

cause i had my heart broken 

on a summer day

I need to get over her

in a summer way

overtime there is no pain

nightmares are gone

my own dreams are back again

i wasn't feeling so alone

friends's and family

mend you back to happily

but once a b***h fucked with me

and from that b***h I'm never free.

Reviews

[Brittney]

I agree with the revIew below, def has the potential to be an amazing song, I like the rhyming throughout it flows effortlessly. Bravo

[slayerjay]

Thank you!

[karthickarun]

good vocabulary and nice romance sprit. can compose a song with this

[slayerjay]

lol it was freestyle not really composed