New beginnings.

New beginnings.

A Poem by rach

If this was really a fresh start,
a new beginning.

Why does it hurt so much?

© 2015 rach


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dan
Going back to square one and attempting to start anew does not always work as it's drawn up. Once a background of hurt has been established it's hard to start up again without the residual hurt tagging along for the ride. A lot of thought and emotion packed into such a small write. Nicely done. take care...dan

Posted 4 Years Ago


New beginnings can be an extremely painfully thing. They might hold dreams and hope but they can also hurt at knowing the road is still long. You ask a very deep but good question though. New beginnings are suppose to be fun but yet they bring so much pain and hurt. It's easy to lose hope at this. However new beginnings do have bright sides as well

Posted 4 Years Ago


Oh.. very strong words. Well, yeah.. once the heart gets broken & then it re-starts to start the life with the same love, it becomes a bit hard to bear what it brings to hearts. Your insights ov'r the love're very deep & thought invoking. They speak of love deeply & tells how badly the love may hurt you if you treat it wrong. Nicely pen'd up. Emotional write it is though thoughtful enough to be read. Great job. Keep it up!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Time heals all wounds...
Wy does it hurt so much?
Perhaps we all love to much? Or to little for some?
Anyways nice words love...

Posted 4 Years Ago


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613
I can relate to this a lot. In little words you managed to get me feeling nostalgic.

Well done.

- Brittney

If you have the time, I'd appreciate it if you would check out my novel, HIM. (:

Posted 4 Years Ago


Punctuation error?

To start over without someone you love can be heartbreaking and almost impossible to even contemplate. It tears at your gut and makes you feel stuck in sorrow and pain. Even just starting over again with anything can be hard.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I like it. The beginnig is fresh but have is tough. I like it. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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