No Tears My Way Come

Just thoughts...

I hear the passing of time like a wind distant

across the horizon where the rising sun

shall meet the falling moon...

soon has passed and yet here stand I
waiting...wishing...whispering to no one
but the crashing waves of yesterday
deafened by the spoken promises of

tomorrow that never show...

and the broken wings of today that
have stifled the unsung song...
lyrical movement of lips and tongue
yet no sound escapes...

and so here stand I upon the

lodestone of my world
and sigh...

but do not cry...
for no tears my way come.

Author's Note

Not polished or even edited...just free flowing words on a page. Review at will.

Reviews

[Creepy Swine Guy]

I think that it's some of your best work. This is you ... from the inside. Not trying to sound grand or magnificent, just dripping thoughts ... feelings. The only thing that I would do is add a line ... not necessarily to the poem, perhaps only to your soul. That line would be ...

"But yet there remains ... hope."

[Tate Morgan]

there is such a depth to you and your abilities i have to step up the work of reading them for fear you would hide something in them that only a careful read er will find lol Very nice a dream within your own life's dream

[Dream Weaver]

Such a gorgeous piece of
writing. No need for polishing
or editing. Beautifully scripted!

[Ladysue]

oh, I love this one and i agree this is magnificent and with a wonderful flow.

[THE LOST ROSE]

You flowed. You just inspired me. Unedited? I am not sure I will touch this. Maybe i am biased because i love the idea of love and this poem oozes a romantic thought and visual.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I think the free flow of this poem gives it it's power... unedited emotions are the truest... with that being said... I see a lot of inner strength in the face of adversity in this poem. I love it as is.

[Ken Simm.]

Poignant and remarkable for something not edited but certainly polished. A heartfelt paen of longing.