Parade

I had a fake birthday.

There were real people; With real families, real leisure activities, and real back pains.

It was two days late. It wasn't my birthday.

Reviews

[radicalartist]

this is an interesting poetic structure
like the way its used
good job

[Smelly Feet]

Thank you. I'll use your criticism in my future writings. :)

[Crayon]

I like it. It's unique, but I wish there was a bit more detail.