happy but sad

I did this years ago so I don't know hot good they are

happy yet sad

no one can help

no one can say

what's wrong with me.

i feel so alone and unloved.

I hide with cheer no need to fear.

my love is gone

to some-other girl.

there is one black tear

I turn my head I turn my face

no deed to fear

I wish my love would come back here!

Reviews

[zendikar]

ha! nice job with this I just went from being engaged to nothing... with the past 2 months and you captured the feeling well!

[Peony]

This piece implies a shift, from one relationship to the next. Yet typically, the pain we feel, is an affliction from within, and this piece portrays that nicely. Well done!