I don't know what love feels like

Inspired by Bob Dylan's music

Hey where you going

Want to come with me?

I’m not sleepy and

I’ve got nothing better to do.

Let’s not stay sober

Let’s have some fun

Have a cigarette under the sinking sun.

Hey where you going?

Want to come with me?

I’m not sleepy, and

I’ve got nothing better to do.

Take your flute

Please play a song for me

I can’t sing

But listening is something I can do

Your voice captures the stars

Your eyes frame the moon

I think I want to hold you in my arms

But who knows?

There’s no need to hurry

I’ll think about this slowly.

Hey where you going?

Want to come with me?

I’m not sleepy and

I’ve got nothing better to do

Let’s stay a while

Leave the world behind

Veiled in a smokescreen

From our cigarettes.

Hey let’s get going

Please stay with me

I think I’m sleepy

Because I’m safe with you.

Reviews

[Jade]

I think I want to hold you in my arms
But who knows?
There’s no need to hurry
I’ll think about this slowly.

I really like this part, This is a well written write. I like the longing in it

[Chryiss]

Aww, I loved the ending. It really feels like this could be a song, especially with the repetition. As a poem, that repetition contributes to the ending feeling of comfort being with that person and wanting to stay together. Lovely~