Confusion

I've been here before, or so it seems

Why can't I stop these crazy dreams?

I'm here, I'm there, I'm gone again

You don't want to know where I've been.

I've seen things that would make you cry

Make you wonder how & why.

I come to you when you need me most

I'm not a spirit, I'm not a ghost.

You close your eyes, I come to life

I cut you deep, I need no knife.

My weapon's control, I use it well

I'll leave you racing the tunnels of hell.

Running faster, out of breath

Which do you choose, life or death?

I gave you a choice, now you must pick

The choice is yours, it's not a trick.

My name is you, your name is me

We've always been one, we're the same you see.

We've made a path in which we walk

No room for words, forget small talk.

I'm your subconscious, now you know

I'm here to stay, I'll never go.

I'll hang around until the end

We might as well be best of friends.

I'll do for you if you do for me

We'll live together in harmony.

So close your eyes, relax, let go

I'll show you all you need to know.

I'm in charge, I know what to do

You stay asleep, I'll protect you.

Until such time we meet again

Just remember--we're best friends.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"I'll leave you racing the tunnels of hell.

Running faster, out of breath

Which do you choose, life or death?

I gave you a choice, now you must pick

The choice is yours, it's not a trick.

My name is you, your name is me

We've always been one, we're the same you see."

There is no confusion reading and knowing that your poetry is wonderful...I like those lines the most...:)

[smurfett]

Thanks Sami...I appreciate the feedback. I'm glad you liked it. Your thoughts are important to me. =)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...Any time...:)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Reminds me of my poem "You" which has the same concept except that yours has a good ending. I enjoyed the rhymes and the messages etched. Lovely poem!

[smurfett]

Thank you poet...

[Latifa]

My name is you, your name is me
i loved this one smurfett it is so deep and well expressed

[smurfett]

Thank you so much for your read and comments poet! =)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

oh now that is incredibly awesome. Brilliant!

[smurfett]

Thank you Neva. I appreciate the feedback. =)