I Am From

I Am From

A Poem by Anonymously
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English school assignment turned to a vent.

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I am from mountains, looming and grand,
From the echoes of screams that ring from caverns,
The white-capped tops
The jarring cliffs

I am from the lake, and the surrounding forest-
Pine trees that stretched shadows across dry leaves,
A bitingly cold liquid
An angry swarm of mosquitoes

I am from sleepless nights, under the covers,
reading an atlas and Erin Hunter,
J.R.R. Tolkien and the Bible,
All at age eleven

I am from quiet rooms in the upstairs, 
the light of the sun long since below the dip of the mountains,
I am from the darkness, where I sit and type,
no matter how deep I fall into the night-

I am from the clicking of a pen,
From the roar of insanity, 
From the buzz of curiosity-

I am from horrific family reunions and parties,
where nobody wishes to be, but the facade stretches even thinner yet
where the people throw on smiles and howl strained laughter,

I am from the funerals that pass each week, where we shed our tears and say a few words,
without really feeling anything for the deceased! 
How can we cry about these relatives we've yet to meet?
Can we mourn for those we've never really known?

I am from a faked expression
From bleached carpets
From dust in the cupboards, 
From a bin of the homemade,
From a house of crumbling bricks-

I am from where I feel disappointed in-
I am from the windowsill, where I see the future I crave-
I am from the other side of a prison cell,
And I watch myself watching from where I am from.

© 2017 Anonymously


Author's Note

Anonymously
Please do not base reviews on spelling/grammar/etc, but please tell me if there is an error so I might be able to fix it. I am more focused on getting feedback for writing depth and such.

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Wow... I loved this piece so much! I loved the way you can feel the emotions being poured out onto the page! These 2 lines really strucked me:

I am from where I feel disappointed in-
I am from the windowsill, where I see the future I crave-

A wonderful read, thank you for sharing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anonymously

6 Years Ago

Thank you so very much, I'm glad you liked it!
Kesha

6 Years Ago

You are welcome!



Reviews

Wow... I loved this piece so much! I loved the way you can feel the emotions being poured out onto the page! These 2 lines really strucked me:

I am from where I feel disappointed in-
I am from the windowsill, where I see the future I crave-

A wonderful read, thank you for sharing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anonymously

6 Years Ago

Thank you so very much, I'm glad you liked it!
Kesha

6 Years Ago

You are welcome!

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Added on April 30, 2017
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