Leaves

You and me part of the same tree just young leaves when we did entwine

Through rain and storm kept each other warm a shelter most divine

But in time we began to climb and our branches grew apart 

Still holding tight, with all our might yet so far from the start

Finally torn apart from our start we reached for each other

Too far to clutch or even touch we entwined with another

Now months past and at last you reached the sky blue

One day you flew away I still remember the youth of dew

Reviews

[Inkspire]

Stunning !
The poem has a flow and fun to read
Amazing metaphor

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your read and kind words of encouragement

[Betty Hermelee]

stunning metaphor of emotive love, ….you bring the tree branches to life as humans move on in their love relationship and as they age…they may separate more in physicality yet their love sustains until one goes on to heaven…..then memory lingers……beautiful!
Warmly, B🌷🌷🌷

[Soren]

Thank you so much Betty for the review and understanding of this poem it means a great deal

[Betty Hermelee]

always my pleasure to review your work Soren.
Warmly, B

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[Neville]

its hard to forget such moments as these .. until they are all but gone .. I find it helps tho' to try & write every single one of them down .. Neville

[Soren]

Thanks so much Neville I appreciate the read and comment as always

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Really like the inline rhyme...it fits so well with the theme...
and gets the reader entwined with the poem.
j.

[Soren]

Thank you so much Jacob for the read and kind words they are most appreciated.

[Coyote Poetry]

It is so sad Soren. Love can be near and we allow her to escape.
(Now months past and at last you reached the sky blue
One day you flew away I still remember the youth of dew)
We do remember and we shall never understand. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Soren]

Coyote your words mean a great deal and your reads of these simple lines make my day.

[Coyote Poetry]

I am glad. I adored this poem Soren.

[Dorian]

Presented a powerful and visual narrative. A great poem with a well used metaphor.

[Soren]

Thank you Dorian yes I realize that this metaphor is often used as is wood itself which I still love. Your words are so appreciated

[Dylan Macadham]

...Sadly beautiful, sadly true, love the tree metaphor.

[Soren]

Thank you so much for the read and supportive comment they are most appreciated