California Winter

A short little poem about winter in a place that is warm.

I watch the grass turn greener, instead of turning white

My feet do not leave footprints, this scene does not seem right

For even though it's warm out, I'd rather watch the snow

A California winter, doesn't feel like home

Author's Note

Just a little poem for a contest :)

Reviews

[junXion]

Well done Kier! I always love impressionistic views of natural phenomena and you, as they say, "nailed it"! You might be interested in some lyrics of the band Opeth, your poems really have the same feeling to them. Thank you for your work. Sincerely yours, Jules.

[JoeM]

Notwithstanding your sentiments about LOOKING at snow, I say viva la Californian winters.
Nice poem, very well expressed.

[Anne]

I love the short, vision of a California Winter. I can definitely relate, as we just moved her from Massachusetts.

[Relic]

I watched the rose parade the other day and saw people wearing jackets. I always wondered about the whether in California.

Nice poem. Hope you win.