without you

at times i wonder if she casted a spell on me

With out you i feel lost.

Upon the long night came a warm breeze that stole my heart,

You  reached out to my spirit with the gentleness of a silent wind,

that brushed aside the walls of denial that hold my spirit down

.

Your presence is the ward that chases off the madness of isolation as it threatens to erase my soul.

A whisper carried forth eases all the pain and anguish to oblivion'

The warm breeze may came and go as you wish but without you i feel lost

I dare not hope for any more than that which is freely given or i may lose what i have.

Reviews

[Shirlena]

Whoever the object of your affections are, if this piece doesn't make her take notice then it's just not there. It is a fortunate person who becomes someones muse as it produces some of the best poems we create although I don't think I've seen one as warm and open as this. If you are anything like you write what a fortunate girl.

[Dash the Reaper]

thanks shir,,actualy she is yet to notice

[Shirlena]

Well I hope she does soon :) and ur welcomed.

[cycy]

interesting poem dash..............

[Shannon April Alice]

dash, please keep writing and if you are keep sharing. it's little gems like this that are enchanting to read. you think to yourself, oh i remember feeling that way...i remember that.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Really good write sweet and Romantic.



Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.

Blessings. kindred poet

[Dash the Reaper]

thanks for the review love,

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet

[Sami Khalil]

This was good Dash. We need to send pain and anguish to oblivion when we learn the lessons of life...Bravo.................

[Dash the Reaper]

thanks sami..pain and anguish to oblivion it is

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....