you

you

A Poem by speakingcolors
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i'm pretty sure this one isn't finished.

"

ever so beautiful

ever so true

ever so perfect

ever so you

© 2009 speakingcolors


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I like this! :) I think that it is nice short how it is.

Posted 14 Years Ago
I love this and its simplicity. If you added more, it feels as if it would ruin the mood you get from reading it. Somehow knocking it off balence.



Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a good start

Posted 14 Years Ago
Short and sweet. It gets straight to the point. I don't even think that it needs to be finished.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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 Added on September 3, 2009

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speakingcolors
speakingcolors

somewhere outside looking in, PA



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poet/songwriter/author sometimes I feel so much it hurts. i have all these thoughts running through my head, little segments of a whole that i can't see. most of them never get put down in writ.. more..

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