I Beg of You

You talk your words of worries
Embrace me with your straight-jacket hugs
Deceivingly to you
It isn't a comfort
Insanity is not our conclude
I beg of you
Stop being my asylum
I only wish to wander
To the edge of the world and back
I promise
It'll only take a lifetime
Meet me where the sea begins
Where the salt water turns fresh
We will trap a rainbow in our net
And discuss things the universe fears
Turn around and look sideways
My world isn't as dark as it may seem

Reviews

[StarryNights]

I like that this poem is beautiful, is a little dark especially in the beginning, and a has a good flow to it

[Irena]

beautiful poem
i especially love the ending and "stop being my asylum"
great wording and flow
good read(:

[KAREN]

Beautiful!

Meet me where the sea begins
Where the salt water turns fresh
We will trap a rainbow in our net

Love it!