Honey

The walls are melting away
Into the overpowering waves of day
Blackened paint is sliding to the floor
Its seeping beneath my door
In threat to suffocate us underneath my covers
As I sleep beside my lover
Peacefully

Reviews

[Valentine]

Short and sweet..I often just listen to his breathing beside me and thank God for him..Lovey write..Kathie

[STAR CHILD]

this is short but very beautiful Ma'am

[Stella]

Another wonderful poem, although this one was short I didn't find it lacking in any way. I love all your poetry and I enjoy going through and reading them.

[DreyaArt]

short and darkly sweet i love this! Wonderful writing, I always very much appreciate what wonder people can creat in so few words, my poems are usually very long, and I cant believe people actually read them all the way through lol. Anyways well done, please keep writing :)

[StarryNights]

Very beautiful, its an amazing poem! It paints a dark, but powerful picture in the mind

[Jibin]

Beautiful and simple, but with lot of inner meaning, i could touch it...
:)

[FallenHeroXx]

Great write. Really great! Keep up the good job!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice demolition of walls..

[Rae]

A beautiful piece. Keep writing!!