Probably more Than I Should

You and I were meant to be,

Sad that we are meeting quietly

We should be able to express our love openly,

It shouldn't be a secret that I love you and you love me.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The love we hide in the dark will appear one day in the light and break up a life. I like this poem. You made your point in so few words. The poem is outstanding.
Coyote

[Gomer LePoet]

Forbidden Lovers, under the covers

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Check his finger for a white band of flesh where he usually wears his wedding ring! lol

[GhostWoman]

It's short, yes, but I almost cried. It's like, really, emotional.

[deeps]

I really enjoyed this piece alot.
Very well written

[Ruth]

I like the darkness to this piece xx

[Mitch*Dandy]

Aw this is beautiful! It's a sweet poem. I like how you made the ending "It shouldn't be a secret that I love you and you love me" LOVE THAT LINE!! >_> Anyway, good poem I can't wait to read more of your poems!!! =)
-Rachel