Best Drug

9-21-07 [Originally Written @ my good friends]

Things aren't always what they seem,

We look from the outside into this dream

Seeing you gaze into my eyes,

makes the sadness within me just seem to die

It is usually good to feel like this,

Especially with each and every kiss

So to you I give a smile and a hug,

As being this loved is the best drug.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

All drugs have the tendancy to inflict addiction. I'll never depend upon another for my own happiness. I will be happy and share that happiness with others instead. Of course, I don't have anyone to love me like that anyway so it may just be a case of Aesop's "sour grapes". lol

[Ruth]

It so is! lol xx

[deeps]

Ah! This is so wonderful and so sweet.
I like this alot.

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

This is so sweet, I adore this poem. Even though it is short, it is brilliantly written and the rhyming is just perfect! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is the best drug. Sometime we need good friends and family to boost our spirit. Poem is very good. I like the feel of positive hope. The description was excellent. Last line told the story.
Coyote

[Dante Walker]

You must really care about your friends, writing such a good poem about them...
writing poems is hard for me, it could just be me but still ^.^
good job