Revive

Revive

A Poem by StacyPerry

If I stand to lose this fight,
Then you should tell me now this very night
If you shall still walk away,
Then you should let me know this very day
If I'll slumber then wake to an empty bed,
You should give me your excuse in this time ahead
If you plan to leave me now,
You should explain and tell me how
If you are hiding something from me,
You should try to explain it, can't you see??
So if this disease is eating you alive,
Let me help you through it maybe you I can revive.

© 2010 StacyPerry


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So if this disease is eating you alive,
Let me help you through it maybe you I can revive.

I absolutely loved the rhyme and the overall flow of this piece a lot..
It is also very inspiring, thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts here with us...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poem is very good. In the struggle to lose and win in love and emotion. Sometime one person must bend so there is a opening for forgiveness and a new beginning. I loved your ending. Sometime we must forgive and leave a open door.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

oh yea. good write. (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It would always be nice to have a 'heads up'
when bad things are to come, unfortunately,
usually this does not happen; but then,
would we truly want to know?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yearning connection, to be "let in"
Awesome work!
xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with Kit Kat, the rhyming is amazing, and the poem flows very easily. You get your idea across very easily. Yet again, another great poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful flow and rhyme scheme
I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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StacyPerry
StacyPerry

Ashtabula, OH



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I have another profile on here I can not get into, so I had to start a new one. Please read ALL of my Poetry and Writings on this page and my old site on here [in which I have a lot of work.....*a tea.. more..

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