Switch & Smile

11-7-2010 [clocks were turned back an hour in the States and I also THINK I found my "career" calling as a transition from ADPR to something later mentioned IF it occurs]

Switch & Smile
The wait of not knowing,
The face that is glowing
The excitement within,
The thoughts of what could have been
Not sure if it'll occur,
Will they choose him or will they choose her??
I keep my hand raised,
Please may I be the one with the praise??
Can't thank you enough,
These past 11 years have been rough
I've done my best and now want more,
It'll quiet the others and I can even the score
I would be just as good as 'you',
I'll even be the one who tamed the shrew
I can do this I know,
Let's give it a go
I'll thank you ahead of time,
Thank you for letting me receive this sign
An email of smiles,
It's been way too long of a while
so as the next chapter begins,
Everyone who deserves a break and myself shall be the one in the end who wins.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. I really do. I had to read it a few times. It is a fast pace poem with some strong points.
"I've done my best and now want more,"
I like these words and the positive feel of this poem. The ending was very good. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Black Cat Fever]

A very positive poem.

[Inci 2]

very nice, refreshing and positive